This got me in loose footing so I choose to be off putting
In this world that willfully went into chaos I'd instantly start shooting, perusing and ruining everyone's chances at looting.
starting a fight then dippin outa societys line of sight '
Like I restarted a world that won't get the pleasure of ever seein light.
Anarchy must achieve a veterancy, there fore no mercy, yet Percy bringing his soul for the curse he wants lifted. This perception was not blessed but was gifted.
With a whistle Percy can pull a pillaging pistol that gods will has been instilled, a power he him self has never revealed
The pistol resemlbles what man cant handle, anarchy is love's perfect example
Fights are what society gets for being mammals
Man I man handle panhandlers for loose change ill tell you now i won't change
I will just be a rearranged teenager stranger.
Devilish vibes are creepin like a fleetin' feelin' over the seven seas across expansive amount of territories
But this is nothing that busting a comprehensive rhyme cant handle, please just release the people and take this as an example from someone whos better in writtens.
Kittens beat fat kats who have a rap for spittin egotistical fact, but when the mystic react he made little eye contact and said, "Your race was never meant to have a trace of free thinking factors."
So whats my use, why doesn't everybody abuse the truths that fuck up the image of youths
Let me tie this back to anarchy
Lets burn down congress
flames enveloping our still developing caucus that mocks us.
So I can show all the congress friends that America is no longer the center for free men
All that place WAS is a place for dreams on parchment and pen to get enacted every now and then.
Congress men, lets take a look at the elderly, line up all orderly, expressions look morbid to me maybe if you didn't take 20% of their check every week it coulda gone to them still movin in the street.
I think I've come to a point where I almost obsess over your writing.
ReplyDeleteI love what you can do with words.
It's inspiring and creative and I love it.
Thanks!:)
DeleteI'll rap this with you. Or beatbox or something.
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Ahhhh that woulda been rad I didn't see this in time. Me and river pulled it out though.
DeleteThis has got to be the most amateur word flow and sentence structuring used in a song by a rapper since K-Fresh or Lil B. You don't really think this is something that could be said out loud without constantly stumbling around your words like an oaf, do you? The lyrical content is clearly an attempt to impersonate the dark subject matter discussed by similar rap personalities such as Hopsin, Tech N9ne, and The Creator, Tyler. Unfortunately you aren’t even 1 percent as talented as any of the listed artists. You come off as incredibly angsty, shallow, and try hard anarchist even though you’ve never actually been marginalized by “the system” or experienced anything but an extraordinarily privileged American white male existence who very much benefits from the socioeconomic status given to you because of your innately born genetic characteristics. The mere fact that you have the time to write this incoherent mess is a sign of your privilege.
ReplyDeleteA society which has completely unrestricted autonomy such as anarchy will always be worse than a society with legislature that controls/restricts certain human behaviors that potentially cause human suffering. The problem with your ideology is that it’s destructive, and contains extreme logical fallacies which are only useful for a hypothetical reality. Destruction of current political systems is not a realistic method of progress. Progressive policies, political movements, political action, and innovation are the only realistic ways to go about creating a better society for everyone but you’re probably too lazy and privileged to bother with that kind of shenanigans. Why anarchy will never happen is because a healthy human brain has the gift of cognitive thought that allows it to discern and articulate if it should execute an action based on the amount of human flourishing or suffering that action would cause. In conclusion an entire field of Social Science could be dedicated to the study and understanding of why the average modern edgy hipster teenage consumer sponge of America even tries to indulge and romanticize in a fantasy like anarchy.
I seriously hope you don’t think this hobby is going to evolve into a job.
Lol? I just play with words.
DeleteObviously made you feel or think something if you took time to write that hahahaha
DeleteDude, Cole. Delete this comment and forget about it.
DeletePeople can hide from criticism but they won't ever improve as individuals.
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